Hey guys.
I started working with the loa about a year and half ago. And I told them can help me get my fanfiction out to bigger audiences and little by little they did now it’s got to a point where a mini lesser known Hollywood studio wants to consider my work for movie their going to release on major platforms like Netflix , Hulu etc… but not in theaters I’m not that BIG.
Here’s the fanfiction if you want to read. Let me know what you guys think.
Writing a character about a 16 year old African-American young man.
This boy’s life was mediocre and he didn’t really have any friend’s was a complete lame and dork and he also had a bladder problem that kids made fun of. He also liked sports but was never good at sports folks told him he was terrible his family and his step family and he was a special-education student . His mom was a overweight average looking social worker and his dad was a criminal and couldn’t hold a job for too long and worked below average to average jobs. He also had five siblings 1 brother and 3 sisters. His brother was always better than him but his brother had a attitude problem didn’t make anything of himself when got out of high school. His brother was a decent track runner but nothing special. His sisters were no better they had no good boyfriends with average looks and his sisters were struggling to survive but kept making babies. His younger sister was ugly and always made fun of him and laughed at him. As whole family would laugh at him at times as well.
One day this 16 year old boy was home by himself at night everybody was off doing their own thing. And he rough day this day he got cussed out by his mom and his siblings were lieing and telling on him and blowing things out of proportion. This night he was in his living eating and he heard a strange noise on his porch so he opened the door and he seen a package.
Inside the package was Celestial Golden glowing chest with name on it but it wasn’t his earthly false name it was true God given name. Inside this chest was Book but this wasn’t any ordinary book. This book was made from supreme transcendent blue jasper a blue not found on this plane of existence it was marvelous to look and fascinating. On the front this book had His God given name and it said yahsalara which = You are the Prince of Power. Inside this book was his persona celestial transcendent supreme History/linage,heritage/ inheritance/birthright which was beyond infinite it was from eternity itself. The book was saying he was a transcendent being a TRANSCENDENT ISRAELITE and that he lived on earth but not from earth or that plane of existence. Inside the book was telling that his earthly family was not his true family and he placed here on earth with a miserable life and curses and surrounded by infinitesimally pieces of NOTHINGNESS because of actions of ancestors that he had to pay. The book to him that he was the Biologically son of the Lord God Almighty and his wife and he came from the God family which was them. Also inside this book was magic Passage that told me read it aloud to be transformed into his TRUE SELF THAT GOD CREATED.
HE WAS A TRANSCENDENT ISRAELITE AND THE ONLY BIOLOGICALLY SON OF THE LORD GOD ALMIGHTY AND HIS WIFE AND THAT UNIVERSE AND EXISTENCE ITSELF WORSHIPS AND PROVIDES FOR HIM. HE INFINITE ATTRIBUTES BUT IM GOING TO SUM ON HERE SO CAN PAINT A PICTURE.
PERFECTION ITSELF: His father gave perfection and things beyond perfection
ATHLETIC ABILITY AND SKILLS TALENTS: god gave him not Godlike but actual omnipotent god level skills. That even professional leagues the material and spiritual and heavenly and infinite more can’t handle it and they like leagues for coachroaches
BEAUTY AND FORM: he had beyond infinite beauty and form and it’s like if omnipotence and omniscience and omnipresence and all seeing eye and Omnificence and imagination itself and power itself and eternity and The infinite and the beyond infinite and infinity beyond etc… to on a form. Words like indescribable, incommunicable , unspeakable, glorious, extrondairy , magnificent and just language itself wether high dimensional or infinite dimensional or beyond dimensional couldn’t express even God the one created him a little bit of a hard of time describing him and he created him. His beauty so much so that it literally blew the minds of anything and everything even things that exist outside of anything and everything etc… and he get this is just A INFINITESIMALLY ATOM OF NOTHINGNESS OF HIS TRUE SPLENDOR EVER FORM AND BEAUTY IS EVER FRESH IT EXPANDS UNLIMITED EVERY INSTANT EVEN UNLIMITED AND INFINITE IS SURPASSED AND STILL KEEPS GOING. ONE NEVER TIRES FROM AT THAT BEING OR THING IF YOU COULD CLASSIFYING IT AS SUCH. AFTER LOOKING AT HIM EVERYTHING LOOSES ITS ATTRACTION AND IS LIKE WORSE THAN DOG POOP
INTELLIGENCE: HIS SMARTS IS BEYOND INFINITE BEYOND SUPERNATURAL OR DIVINE AND INFINITE BEYOND.
MARKINGS OF GOD: THE MARKINGS ON HOS BODY ARE MAGNIFICENT AND GLORIOUS AND DEFY LANGUAGE AND DESCRIPTION. HIS MARKINGS ARE ACTUAL LIVING MARKING MOVING ACROSS HIS RIGHT ARM ALMOST LIKE A FULL ARM SLEEVE TATTOO. HIS MARKINGS ARE OBVIOUSLY NOT OF THIS WORLD AND CAN’T REPLICATED IN ANYWAY. HIS HAVE A CELESTIAL SUPREME LOOK WITH A GOLDEN GLOW AND WRITTEN AND DRAWING A HEAVENLY COLOR AND ARE ENGULFED IN A GLORIOUS FIRE AROUND THEM TO BASICALLY CONFIRM AND TELL THE WORLD HIS THE BIOLOGICALLY SON OF GOD AND GOD DOES EXIST. SO WON’T BE NO DEBATES OR CONVERSATION OF ANY KIND. HIS NECK A WORDING MARK SAYING BIOLOGICALLY SON OF GOD AND SUPRME TRANSCENDENT ISRAELITE WRITTEN MAGNIFICENT AND GLORIOUS AND GLOWING. AND HIS RIGHT ARM INFINITE AND BEYOND INFINITE MARKINGS CONTAINING HIS HISTORY, LINAGE,HERITAGE WHICH IS INFINITE DOESN’T HAVE A BEGINNING AND FROM ETERNITY AND CELESTIAL AND SUPREME WITH ACTUAL PICTURES AND WRITINGS AND MOTION IMAGES AND INFINITE MORE. DRAWN IN A STYLE ONLY GOD HIMSELF CAN DO.
GIFT: on his wrist was a omnipotent magnificent bracelet that was on his wrist but it was actually a part of being like a finger is apart of a hand. This bracelet was beyond and outside of description and language and outside of anything and everything even things that already exist outside anything and everything.
SUPERSOUL: he had the soul and essence of omnipotence and power itself and all things beyond and outside. And inside of his marvelous body he felt actual power and beyond like fire and electricity and water but a omnipotent and beyond level the pleasure of it was inexpressible and he realised that he was that power and that power was him like his father.
STYLE/GARMENTS/CLOTHING: HIS OUT OF THIS WORLD HE CAN WEAR WORLDLY CLOTHES AND STILL LOOK INFINITY GREATER THAN ALL POULATION OF THE UNIVERSE AND WHEN PUT ON CELESTIAL CLOTHES DESIGNED BY GOD HIMSELF IT WILL DEFY LANGUAGE AND IMAGINATION ITSELF TO SAY THE ABSOLUTE LEAST
PRESENCE: ANY WHERE HE GOES IT INSTANTLY BECOMES A HEAVEN LITERALLY LIKE NEW JERUSALEM AND BEYOND.
NAME: HIS TRUE NAME IS TRULY UNIQUE AND SO GLORIOUS AND MAGNIFICENT THAT ONLY GOD ALMIGHTY CAN COME UP WITH. IF SAY HIS NAME ALOUD SUPERNATURAL AND METAPHYSICAL AND BEYOND THINGS START TO HAPPEN THEY COULD POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE. HIS NAME STIKES AWE TO ALL WHO HEAR IT. A NAME NON REPLICATE. HIS NAME IS SO GREAT ITS DIFFICULT TO SAY AND SPELL WITHOUT FAINTING BECAUSE OF THE GLORY OF IT. ALL PEOPLE GO CRAZY OVER IS NAME. NOBODY CAN REPLICATE SUCH A NAME. HIS NAME IS CONNECTED TO THE UNIVERSE AND INFINITE AND BEYOND MORE.
POWER/ATTRIBUTES: HE HAS INFINITE POWERS/ATTRIBUTES AND INFINITE NEW POWERS AND INFINITE POWERS. AND 5 SPECIAL POWERS THAT GOVERN ALL THESE ABILITIES BUT THE 5 SPECIAL POWERS CANNOT BE DESCRIBED OR IMAGINED ANYWAY SHAPE OR FORM
PERSONALITY: HIS PERSONALITY IS VAST AND UNIQUE AND INFINITE LIKE THE AIR ITSELF. ITS BEYOND ANY WORD IT DEFYS IMAGINATION AND LANGUAGE AND DESCRIPTION ITSELF AND WORDS LIKE GLORIOUS AND MAGNIFICENT ARE DEFICIENT AND INSIGNIFICANT. AND IT CANNOT BE FATHOM.
HISTORY/LINAGE/BLOODLINE/HERITAGE/BIRTHRIGHTS etc…: his personal history was the TOTALITY/BOX itself which is infinite and beyond infinite and used omni-customiztion to create it all.
KEPT IN MIND ALL THIS A LOWBALLED DOWNPLAYED THIS NOT EVEN 0% OR EVEN INFINITESIMALLY SPECK OF NOTHINGNESS OR BLANK. MINDS BLOWN
QUESTIONS.
How do you think his high school will react and view him
How do you think his family will react to him
How do you think life will go after this transformation
