The not so great making payment thread (in poetic form)

There was a thread here that was for people giving thanks to things. But that doesn’t feel appropriate. This also does pertain to world-walking and an accidental vision quest, and does in part deal with the Aesir et al, but it doesn’t quite go in that section either. I’m sharing because my guts say all is not paid in full until the words are read, and future words will be read. So I’m starting this thread here.

They’re songs. Tunes not quite set, although I have been playing with Suno. (Hint: I sometimes prefer to play with my ukulele.) I may have more to write as time goes by, but for the big meat of what’s pushed me into actually giving a rat’s rope is paid as of 2 days ago.

Starting with Hekate’s Skald, because it’s in my clipboard. hahahah.

Why this one: because I’d asked her “How can I pay you?” even though she didn’t answer my question and pretty much just let me talk while feeding me goop on an abalone shell and handing me delicate things to keep. Old crone aspect. I had to walk across the river to see her and her cauldron. I might have decided walking on deathly waters wasn’t safe and floated/flew halfway across… Anyway. She said, “Write about me.” I responded in immediate concern, “I’m not really much for writing short stories anymore… how about a poem… or a song…” and was about to finish with “A comic” but she said with a secretive smile, “Write me a skald.”

I was immediately hit with “she’s finding something amusing” and hit her back with something amusing, that I’m pretty sure she knew I’d hit her back with. It took me days to write it, though. (Slow for me.) But to honor her request, I researched the form.

This sing is meant for banjo and fiddle.

Hekate’s Skald

They say she’s a figure of beauty:
A wonder of magic and fresh delight.
That innocence might not have swayed me.
Demure was the lure of her smile that night
While we stood down by the river,
Bare feet washed in death water sand,
Drinking soup while talking 'bout fashion,
Giving goods from right to left hand.
Hecate and me.

[verse]
Folks swear that she’s wild and wooly
A creature of hell cast out from far lands
Yet mothers grow strong when they listen
To love while in part seeking paths and plans.
But we stood down by the river,
Bare feet washed in death water sand,
Drinking brew while enjoying the night air,
Laughing like kids cuz life is so grand.
Hecate and me.

[refrain, court meter]
Kings clamor, fight and sing
Can they true treasure bring
Peek polite past white veil
Pass only friendly tales
Keep kind eyes, share as kin
Crack jokes to stoke her grin
Take time made good with joy
'Til farewell space employs

[interlude]

[verse]
I’m told she stands at death’s doorway
That’s how she rolls, guiding souls through the dark
With torch and her black hounds beside her
She can leave or love you but will make a mark
Yet we stood down by the river,
Drunk on dew while the moon lit the sky,
While the river passed by us uncaring,
Telling no tales and asking no lies.
Hecate and me.

[outro, skald]
Bee-gold high for wisdom-keeper
Barleycorn plays in metal-hall.
Mom’s peach fire-blessed, rhymer serves neat
World-walker full takes feast along.

[verse]
Yet we stood down by the river,
Drunk on dew while the moon lit the sky,
While the river passed by us uncaring,
Telling no tales and asking no lies.
Hecate and me.

“You come back now, ya hear?”

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Frigga’s Loom

[Verse]
Tangled are lives birthed from the web that she weaves
On those threads that we must dance, crawl and cleave
Each knot a tale, each strand has tears, hope and love
This is the timeless road the goddess weaves alone

[verse]
Winds dance on her loom with patterns aged and divine
Her eyes looking outward far beyond the veil of life
Marvels of breath and death bloom like a rare flower
The sacred spindle turns while her silence speaks of power

[Chorus]
She spins
Strands entwine
Threads of gold spun gracefully tight
She spins
Strands entwine
Binding our fates for day and of night

[bridge]
The strings make a song for her wisdom to keep
As she sews the tears of the hearts that would weep
Unleashes the joy of lovers and friends
Weaving the pathways unto the world’s end

[Chorus]
She spins
Strands entwine
Threads of gold spun gracefully tight
She spins
Strands entwine
Binding our fates for day and of night

[Verse]
The shuttle dances in her hand and hearts unfold
Wise the rhythm of her work as silence she upholds
Her skilled fingers never pause, time bends to her will
To please the queen of gods, weaving her magic still

[chorus]

… I probably should explain each one, but with this one it’d d,be ifficult to tell. So. She was gracious. The end.

Freya

The sea air that kissed her hair
Was blessed to have come too near
Her eyes still search the distant shores
So like me, she is broken.

Space can split the heart and mind
She will grant that love more time
Her golden step brings hope you need
So wisely, she sees between.

[CHORUS]
That is the ocean’s dear daughter
That lady whose soul is most fair
When she rides for the morning
Sunlight on her wind-blown hair
That is the ocean’s brave daughter
That spirit whose soul is most fair

[BRIDGE]
While I lay dying she gave me her hand
While I lay sleeping, she helped me to stand
Death kissed my wings, she called the dawn
Commanding fly on, Small One, fly ever on.

When all paths have disappeared
She reveals what is not clear
Her wisdom spans a thousand years
Suddenly, she remembers.

[CHORUS]
That is the ocean’s dear daughter
That lady whose soul is most fair
When she rides for the morning
Sunlight on her wind-blown hair
That is the ocean’s brave daughter
That spirit whose soul is most fair


On this one, she didn’t actually do anything except show up that I know of. LOL. But this was my reaction anyway.

All Father

Sad your face, that wizened look,
That stance pushed further down,
While thought-feathers escape skyward.
Your sight sealed by a silent frown

[chorus]
You let your hunger eat your soul.
It carved your path and set the goal.
I cannot give the balm you need,
But I understand how it is to bleed.

Leathered cheek, gift from the road,
A toll paid for your wander.
The cost was higher than you thought;
The ache birthed when you ponder.

[chorus]
You let your hunger eat your soul.
It carved your path and set the goal
I cannot give the balm you need
But I understand how it is to bleed.

Your gaze is down, I’m looking up
Towards light above your head.
No other crown weighs a soul down
Nor holds so firm to living or dead

[chorus]
You let your hunger eat your soul.
It carved your path and set the goal
I cannot give the balm you need
But I understand how it is to bleed.

[outro]
Be calm now, my father
My hands are on your shoulders
We’ll carry on.
We’ll carry on.


I’ve noticed when people speak of him, they talk about his knowledge and power, etc. But when he leaned down towards me, I was moved by another thing entirely so that I reached out to comfort him.

Mengloth’s Hall

When they fly, we draw the circle
When they’re blind, we guide with our hands
We’ll bind their wrists and cut the bone
To meet what their healing demands

[Chorus]
Our hands working as one
Nine hearts beating in time
At the healer’s command we restore
What was broken we make divine

[Verse 2]
When she presides, the works are mighty
She cuts to the heart with her hand
And we work together with purpose
Restoring what time would unmend

[Chorus]
Our hands working as one
Nine hearts beating in time
At the healer’s command we restore
What was broken we make divine

[Bridge]
Patience, such patience
This our unspoken creed
We follow she who cares
Patience to those in need…

[Verse 3]
They come to us broken and hurting
And we rise and help them to stand
We’ll pour the cup, sharpen the blade
To fulfill what the goddess has planned

[Chorus]
Our hands working as one
Nine hearts beating in time
At the healer’s command we restore
What was broken we make divine


This was inspired by the event that pushed me into the deep. “She’s just a minor god,” a histrorian said to me. I’m like… So??? They fixed some things!!! Who cares!!!

The Hecate song was the only one I was directly asked to write. The rest were just reactions or whatever. I’d like to write a couple more, but they wouldn’t have anything to do with the event.

And I think I already shared the Mengloth one in another thread? But here they are as a collection - the reactions that deal with the spirits and gods anyhoo. We’ll see what the future brings.

And now if this thread is read, I thank you greatly for your time and eyeballs.

looks heavenward I’M GOING BACK TO MY *** COMIC NOW. DO YOU HEAR ME???